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Diddly
January 24, 2011, 5:13pm Report to Moderator Report to Moderator

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Hey, did you model GOONAD after me?  I mean I DO fear the same people and "worship" very similar people as well...
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Diddly
January 25, 2011, 2:23pm Report to Moderator Report to Moderator

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Sorry, it's the Earthies that fear and worship those people, according to what the GOONAD know about the planet.  I know, it's not quite clear.  I had to juggle the original wording because of font size (although I've since learned how to fix that).


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Probably should have said, Drawn to Earth by... instead of Drawn by..  The latter makes it sound like Goonad was a picture drawn by transmissions.  Just a thought.


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I'd rather say "Attracted by transmissions from an endangered species"  "Earthies!"  since stating Earth twice seems redundant.
Then "Earthies worship ..." "and fear ..."


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There we go.  Fixed the wording to make it more clear.  Thanks for the tips guys!


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